My whole life I have never had an issue sharing my mind and my thoughts to others. The struggle however came when I wanted to express all that on paper. Learning how to blog using this system on CUNY Commons has allowed be to reach out to an audience I once did not know how to reach. Through blogging on a wide variety of topics, I learned how to connect to the readers and now I don’t have to hesitate using different platforms. I really enjoyed making a YouTube video on the dead technology, it was the first time I felt comfortable coming in front of a video that will be posted online for everyone to see. I enjoyed being a blogger that uses imagery to prove my point. I feel as though once you give people a visual of what your trying to do they understand it better. Going back to the previous blogs, I made sure to improve the grammar and how I categorize all the content so that it can be more accessible. The biggest thing all the exercises taught me were to be more careful and more critical with my content and the content of my peers, and I feel as though it has equipped me to understand what a good blog is. Thank You all for allowing me to reach out to you and share a little piece of my thoughts.
Revisions/Online Person Blog #13/Sadad Mohammad


Andie Silva (she/her)
I would have liked some more specifics about which/how many posts you went back to revise, and which ones you think were weaker or stronger. Nonetheless, I agree that your blogging style certainly evolved and became more confident throughout the term!